As teenagers grow up, they become more independent and start making their own decisions. However, during this period, it can be easy for some of them to form bad habits. These bad habits, if left unchecked, could lead to more serious ones when they become adults. For example, some of them may become involved in tobacco or alcohol abuse, which can lead to physical and mental health problems. To prevent harmful habits like these from dominating a teenager's life is essential. They must learn to recognise bad habits early and make appropriate changes.
if left unchecked 是条件状语从句的省略形式,完整形式为 if they are left unchecked。当从句主语与主句主语一致且含有 be 动词时,可省略主语和 be 动词。
To prevent...is essential 不定式作主语
To prevent harmful habits like these from dominating a teenager's life 是不定式短语作主语,谓语用单数 is。prevent sb from doing sth 意为「阻止某人做某事」。
To change bad habits is never easy, even with many attempts. There is a famous saying based on the philosophy of Aristotle: "We are what we repeatedly do." In many ways, our lifestyle is the sum of choices we have made. We make a choice to do something, and then we repeat it over and over again. Soon that choice becomes automatic and forms a habit that is much harder to change. The good news is that we can change, if we understand how habits work.
We are what we repeatedly do 中,what 引导表语从句,what 在从句中作 do 的宾语。意为「我们就是我们反复做的事情」。类似结构:You are what you eat(人如其食)。
According to modern psychology, we must first learn about the "habit cycle", which works like this: Firstly, there is a "cue", an action, event, or situation that acts as a signal to do something. Secondly, there is a "routine", the regular action you take in response to the cue. Thirdly, there is the "reward", the good thing or feeling we get from the routine.
For example, when we feel unhappy (cue), we eat lots of unhealthy snacks (routine), which makes us feel happy (reward). The reward makes us much more likely to continue the cycle, and the bad habit of relying on unhealthy snacks is formed.
which makes us feel happy 是 which 引导的非限制性定语从句,先行词是前面整个主句(we eat lots of unhealthy snacks)。which 代替整件事,意为「这使得我们感到快乐」。
To facilitate a positive change in our bad habits, we must first examine our bad habit cycles and then try to adapt them. We can do this by combining the information from our habit cycles with our own positive ideas. For example, we could try to replace a negative routine with something more positive. So, when we feel unhappy again (cue), rather than eat snacks, we could listen to some of our favourite music instead (routine), which will make us feel relaxed (reward). Aside from changing bad habits, we can also use the habit cycle to create good habits. For example, when we come to an escalator (cue), our normal routine is to ride it, but we could change this routine into something more positive by taking the stairs instead.
rather than 意为「而不是」,连接两个并列成分,表示在两者中选择前者而否定后者。此处 rather than eat snacks 表示「而不是吃零食」。rather than 后接动词原形。
Many of us try to change bad habits quickly, and if we are not successful straight away, we often become pessimistic and give up. In fact, the most successful way to change is not suddenly, but over a period of time. As the Chinese philosopher Laozi wrote, "A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step." One step seems small, but it is essential. To reach the goal of change, a person must show some discipline and repeatedly take many small steps. After all, it is not easy to break bad habits.
not suddenly, but over a period of time 使用 not...but... 结构,意为「不是……而是……」,否定前者、肯定后者。连接两个对称的介词短语。
For young people, there is plenty of time to change bad habits. However, there is no "magic pill" or delete button that will help you; you have to think about your bad habits and decide on some changes. You have the power to build a happy and healthy life full of good habits!
that will help you 是 that 引导的定语从句,修饰先行词 magic pill or delete button。因为先行词被 no 修饰,关系代词只能用 that,不能用 which。
要点摘要
青少年易养成不良习惯,需及早识别并改变
习惯由反复选择形成,了解习惯循环是改变的关键
习惯循环三要素:触发因素、惯常行为、回报
用积极行为替代消极行为来改变坏习惯
改变需要时间和自律,不能一蹴而就
Reading for Writing
TWO LETTERS ABOUT LIFESTYLE CHANGES
两封关于生活方式改变的信
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I realised I hardly ever felt well, either physically or mentally. I often felt sleepy and dizzy, and lacked passion. Most worrying, though, I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches, too.
At the end of the camp I heard, "Change the world by changing yourself." This stimulated my motivation. A dentist once examined me and told me that too much sugar in my meals had damaged my teeth and health. I made up my mind to change two things in my life: to eat nothing with sugar and to exercise regularly.
After that I stopped buying all the sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks that I used to have every day. Whenever I went out with friends, I brought snacks from home, things that didn't have any added sugar: fruit, nuts, dried meat, etc. My exercise was very simple: I went outside every day for at least 30 minutes and did something active. Sometimes I played table tennis or badminton with my cousins. Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood, or just took a long walk.
that I used to have every day 是 that 引导的定语从句,修饰先行词 sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks。used to do 表示「过去常常做」,暗示现在不再如此。
The results have been fantastic. I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind. I sleep soundly at night now. I no longer suffer from a flu virus or toothaches either. Best of all, in my opinion, is how I feel about myself. I feel like I'm in control of my own life. To make choices about myself is within my own power. I CAN change myself. I just need to try.
Best of all...is how I feel about myself 使用了倒装结构,表语(Best of all)前置,系动词 is 居中,真正主语是 how I feel about myself。这种倒装起到强调作用。
As I took part in the summer camp about personal life choices, I started to analyse my choices, especially what I did to relax and how it was affecting my whole life. After starting high school, I felt stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games. I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards! So after the camp, I realised that it was very, very important to adjust my lifestyle. I decided to take control of my life and find other ways to relax.
so absorbed that I played the games day and night 使用 so...that... 结构,意为「如此……以至于……」。so 修饰形容词/副词,that 引导结果状语从句。
It was a big struggle not to join my friends in playing online games as I'm mad for them. However, I realised that to succeed in quitting, I had to replace it with something else. So I thought about what to try. Rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies, and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. Now my dad and I go rock climbing together monthly! It has enhanced the quality of my life, improving my health and increasing my happiness. I get refreshed through climbing, spend more time with my dad, and get to meet new friends.
improving my health and increasing my happiness 是现在分词短语作伴随状语,补充说明 go rock climbing 的效果。improving 和 increasing 与逻辑主语 it(攀岩)是主动关系,故用现在分词。
After six months of trying out new ways of relaxing, I feel much more energetic. I feel that I can change myself for the better. And if that's true for me, then it might truly be possible to change the world for the better. As Gandhi said, "Be the change you want to see in the world."